I've finished the revision of Chapter 5 of StarCraft: Ghost Academy Volume 1, finally. It's off with TokyoPop and Blizzard. There will likely be more revisions of this and Chapter 4, but they should be the nit-picky stuff. The global stuff seems to be okay on them. I am well pleased.
celticboy: "I'm NEVER driving with Keith again, he was about THIS far from the truck before he swerved"
xenaclone: "Are you talking to the invisible man again?" "Talking! We're totally making out!!"
bill_leisner: "Really, optimal ball-kicking distance is right here. That way, you get the full benefit of wearing pointy-toed shoes."
daytonward: "So I've got the little bastard by the back of his neck, right? And he's still giving me lip, so that's when I told him..." * see rest of entry below
slipjig: "Huh. Y'know, I don't remember George Lucas at the bar at all, but that's definitely his phone number. D'you think the Sharpie will wash off?"
* the rest of daytonward's entry: "'Look, dickbag: I don't know what you heard or who you heard it from, but Gandalf was not a rip-off of Obi-Wan Kenobi, so go play Sit 'n Spin with your lightsaber and let the grown-ups talk, all right?' Fuckin' DeCandido."